thnx for your time ..i wrote something that came to my mind after watching braveheart movie ..plz tell me what do you think of it .
A brave heart is the heart that beats for justice and bleeds for its loved ones . That loves with passion and hates with fairness . That judges with wisdom and grasps on values with firmness …….A brave heart is the heart that fights for its country not only by guns and swords but also by litters and words . That stands in the way of the furious waves of oppression like no mountain could ever do …….
It’s a jaguar when it chases the truth .. It’s a lion when it roars at the face of death …it’s a dewdrop on a delicate rose..
Will we find that brave heart on day ?? that’s the question I would love to ask .
and if you could please rate it on a scale of 1-10 …thank you again 
It’s difficult to know what to say about this. The sentiments are laudable but not original but it’s nicely written. However, it’s based on a sham movie that owes little to history. It’s Hollywood’s version and the film-makers make their money from raising emotions in unsubtle ways. Take the time to study real history and base your sentiments on that.
February 20th, 2010 at 8:49 am
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10 Feb 2010 … I have lost interest. I have sunk away at my own cost. … I don’t wish to make light of how you feel at all but this is some pretty typical
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February 20th, 2010 at 9:12 am
You have the heart of this statement set in the right direction, with strength and courage at the forefront, with a shielding of words and determination for freedoms way, keep that sense of spirit for further editing and keep on writing,
re-read and edit wordings later,
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February 20th, 2010 at 9:32 am
It’s difficult to know what to say about this. The sentiments are laudable but not original but it’s nicely written. However, it’s based on a sham movie that owes little to history. It’s Hollywood’s version and the film-makers make their money from raising emotions in unsubtle ways. Take the time to study real history and base your sentiments on that.
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